anyone lived in a pretty how town
(with up so floating many bells down)
spring summer autumn winter
he sang his didn’t and danced his did
Women and men (both little and small)
cared for anyone not at all
they sowed their isn’t they reaped their same
sun moon stars rain
children guessed (but only a few
and down they forgot as up they [...]
Archive for November, 2008
poetry friday: anyone lived in a pretty how town
Posted in poetry, poetry friday, tagged e.e. cummings, poetry, poetry friday on November 28, 2008 | 2 Comments »
the exercise, the experiment, the extreme makeover
Posted in VC, grad skool, middle grade, process, the man behind the curtain, writing, tagged writing, middle grade, revision, VCFA, MFA, manuscript, children's literature on November 22, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
This middle grade novel is turning out to be quite the exercise in patience. I guess it’s to be expected that when you live with an idea for years without really thinking it through before writing.
Last semester I took this thing on because it was the most pressing, the most insistent of my unborn children [...]
poetry friday: nosferatu blues
Posted in movies, poetry, poetry friday, tagged blues poems, jeff fallis, kevin young, poem, poetry, poetry friday, vampires on November 21, 2008 | 4 Comments »
From the collection Blues Poems selected and edited by Kevin Young
Nosferatu Blues
To be honest, I love your awkwardness most.
Not the naughty plumage of your lips
Or the splayed wildcat of your accent
Or the unexploded heartbeat of your paintings,
But your uneasiness in crowds–
How you skirted the edges
And wandered companionless,
Fidgeted and tried to mingle.
What should I tell the [...]
strokes
Posted in VC, YA, fiction, grad skool, process, suze, the man behind the curtain, writing, tagged first person, POV, strokes, third person, workshop, writing, YA or not YA on November 18, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Feverishly working over the new workshop piece, worrying every line. Not because I want it to be perfect, but because it has to work. Like setting up a line of dominoes that won’t correctly splay into their patterns if they aren’t placed just so.
I’m orchestrating five main characters – or rather, two main characters and [...]
the disenyland theory, part two: deja vu
Posted in (not) writing, the man behind the curtain, tagged deja vu, disney, disneyland, past lives, theory on November 12, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
A while back I was talking about my affinity for The Magic Kingdom when I outlined that I had three distinct theories about what it is that draws me in to this hyper-real park. I had it brought to my attention recently that I am two parts behind on my discourse, thus we have part [...]
revision is like…
Posted in Uncategorized on November 11, 2008 | 2 Comments »
building Hoover Dam singlehandedly.
shifting beach sand five feet to the side, one grain at a time.
watching paint dry in humid weather.
using a fork with broth.
herding clouds with a paper fan.
(feel free to contribute)
the diet that ate my camera
Posted in (not) writing, the man behind the curtain, tagged diet, dieting on November 10, 2008 | Leave a Comment »
Okay, so my camera wasn’t really eaten. But I am blaming the diet for making me muddle-headed and causing me to accidentally delete al the pictures on my camera’s flash memory card. So no pictures of my daughter the hobo on Halloween, no pictures from my walk around the block that I hadn’t uploaded to [...]
to vote
Posted in Uncategorized, tagged blog the vote, blogging, vote, voting on November 1, 2008 | 1 Comment »
It’s not the voting that’s democracy, it’s the counting.
~ Tom Stoppard
I was eighteen when I was able to vote in my first national election. It was 1980 and my brain was swimming with a first semester in college and my first time living away from my family. Selective Service had been reinstated and [...]